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Saturday, September 10, 2022

Remnant Wreckage

 

While walking along the shore in Victoria, BC, I noticed the sand covered in driftwood, some pieces huge, like ships had just broken apart, so I took photos of the wreckage. The I saw a poetry prompt on “Tempest” last night, and it reminded me of this photo. Hence this poem was born.


Tossing in the wake

Strewn along the shore

Remnant wreckage

Of a love no more


The once mighty ship

Strength and tranquility

Danced along the landscape

A herald’s fantasy


The crew maintained her visage

Hiding cracks, withered neglect

Pretending all was well

As regard turned to regret


The fateful day the tempest

Came to test their fortitude

The fragile hull splintered

As the ship came unglued


Storm-tossed cross the sea

Found prone upon the sand

A warning sign to all

Of a relationship’s last stand




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